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 eyy ni lai lai ...........eyy lai lai hehe haha!!! ni laii laiii PART 2.......!!!

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Posted on 11-03-08 8:49 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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THANKS to all the ppl who read my other thread... and gave comments and suggestions.....!!!I had posted this in my other thread but just wanted to create a new one .....!!!

This  goes out to SONA1, Spoken, Maaiya, _____, MCMXC, Maddog, Girly GirL, Grunge83, Nepali Nari jyu ....!!!!!

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mero sathi ko twakey bau

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part -I

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It's always 12:00 am midnight . Kamal Bahadur Thapa is not home. He always come home drunk and quite late. Muna Thapa who is Kamal Bahadur's wife is always worried about her husband drinking habit. She never sleeps on time . She waits till her husband is home.Sometime she doesn't sleep as her husband don't arrive home. Kamal Bahadur and Muna Thapa got just one offspring from their 25 years long relationship. Sita Thapa who is my friend is the only daughter of in the Thapa family. Sita is not 19 years old.

 

Sita is my friend who goes to school and comes frm school back home with me. We are really close friends. We study in the same school and in the same class. Sita is really good student . I am just average in studies. But I am better at extra- cirricular activities.

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THE FIGHT NIGHT

One day I had to go to school all alone by myself. I waited for Sita to come to the chautarii where I used to wait for her to come and we would go to school together. Well I waited for her for more than half and hour. There were students passing by me and they were asking meh if I am going to school or not? I would just ignore their question and not listen to them. I waited but then I knew that I was going to be late for my school. So, I thought of heading to school. I had to walk about 1 kilometers of distance all by myself as all the students goes to school using the same way that I use might have been to school already. I knew that I would be late for the school assembly. I just walked lazily. Luckily I got to school before the first period started.

The day went quite boring. I was all alone the whole day. I had no concentration in class. I got quite a few nice comments from the teachers. The school was over finally. I had a long breathe to take after the school was over for that day. I went home and had my khaja. After that I tried to call Sita. As I was curious why she wasn't present today. I called her but she never picked up her cell fone. Then I called her home number. But nobody received the fone. I tried many times . All my efforts to know what really happened to Sita was in vein. So, I decided to go to Sita's home and see her.

Sita's home is about 10 mins away frm my house. I had no problem walking 10 mins as I was worried about what happened to my friend. So, I rushed to Sita's home. I reached there within couple of minutes.

When I reached there. I saw Sita laying in the bed. I was surprised to see her on the bed . Moreover the main door of the house wasn't locked. It was just open. Anyone could enter the house and none would know it. I could see Sita trying to close her eyes and sleep .

As I saw her on the bed. I went nearby her . I wanted to know know why she wasn't present today in school. As I talked thing changed all of sudden.

Kavita- Sita what happened to you ? And why is the door open?

Sita- Well nothing I just had head ache, fever and minor body pain.But I am far better that I was this morning . [She replies meh back with smile in her face. To just pretend that she's fine.]

Kavita- [ I could see her feeling uncomfortable while she's sleeping and could see her breathing not in a normal way ] Well are you feel good . Yu seem to be finding hard to lay urself on the bed.

Sita- I am fine. Well I find it always hard to rest on this bed. This bed is little awkward and uneasy to rest on.Well that's why I am feeling uncomfortable. Yu don't have to worry I am fine.

Kavita- [ I could see a bandage on her forehead and arm.So, I was curious to know what happened actually] Hey, can you tell meh why you are wearing those bandage?

Sita- [ Replies to my question in rather awkward way. I could sense that she didn't want to say what happened actually] I ... fell off the chair last night. I was trying to fix the bulb of the varanda. At that time i tripped off the chair and i got hurt on my forehead and arm.

kavita- How are you feeling now ? Don't tell meh it doesn't hurt or don't act. Tell me the truth.

Sita- Well why would I lie to you. I am saying the fact . I am feeling better now. I think I will come to school after couple of days of leave. Well could you write a leave application and give it to the Principal frm my side Please!!!

Kavita- [ I couldn't say no coz she's my friend moreover she had injury on the right arm .She uses her right hand for everything mostly as she's right handed. So, didn't feel hesitated to say that I would help her.] yesh! Of course I'll write. Don't worry about it . You take care of ur health and eat on time and sleep on time. Well don't think about homework.

Sita- [ Replies with cheerful smile on her face.] Sure, I will .

Kavita- [ I was curious to know why she didn't pick up my fone call.So, asked her ]Well I called you several times but yu didn't receive my call? I guess you were sleeping at that time. [ All of sudden I give the questions answer myself.] Well don't worry you don't have to say why you didn't receive the fone call. I can understand. Yu are sick and have body ache . Yu should take rest. Now I'll go . I'll see you back in the school when you are 100% fit.

[ita just smiles back to meh and gives meh a gesture assuring that she'll be fine soon.]

It was already 7:00 pm and I had to rush back home coz I had to do alot of homeworks . And I had to help my mom in the kitchen. So I thought I should say goodbye.

Kavita-Hey don't think too much and don't get worried you'll be fine and where is Papa and mama. [ I couldn't stop asking coz I didn't see them around the house. And I am too talkative]

SIta- Well they went to the market to do some shopping. I guess they'll be around here around within half and hour.I just told them to leave the door open as I won't be able to go there and open the door.

Kavita- Well stop hiding things frm meh. Tell meh if anything happened with ur legs or not. [ I know it was stupid question to ask as she was sick and this is my stupid bad habit that I can't stop asking about things.]

Sita- [ She is not at all annoyed by all my question but just answers all my questions with patience and full of smile in her face. But she didn't question me any question not even a single] Well nothing has happened to my leg it's just due to the pain that I have on the back. I can't hold myself sometimes. So, it's better I leave it open. AM I right, kaviee ?

Kavita- Well yeah you are right but don't you fear to leave the door open?

[ I always make sure the door is close proper at home. So, had some unfamiliar expression on my face I guess that's why Sita's facial expression changed ]

Sita- Well I know it's scary but I am bold and strong enough to face the fear. And feel no pain when I have to face anything that comes as an obastacle in my life.

[ I could sense some kind of extra energy being stored within herself. I felt so good to see that in her.I was late so I decided to go home. And say goodbye ]

Kavita- Hey, it's been quite late , I have to go now. I was worried about you so much today. I now feel good coz you are feeling good. I'll see you soon in school. I'll be waiting for you. And I'll come to see you on weekends and other days if possible.

[ I waved my hand to her before leaving her house and said goodbyee. She too waved her hand as a gesture of goodbye. Then I came back out inside the house to say goodnight and sweet dreams.]

After leaving the house I could feel that my heart is heavier than it was the whole day. I could sense some kind of cold air going through my mind making meh feel cold with all that I am thinking. As I saw my close friend laying on the bed trying to rest but she wasn't able to do so. I kept on thinking what might have happened. I thought that she might have lied me. And also said to myself why would she lie.Why would she make a joke of the pain she is having righ now. I kept on thinking if she said the truth or not...!!! I was on my way home. It took 24 mins for meh to get home.

-to be continued.....!!!!

 

ROCKEND AKA rocks or rocky

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Posted on 11-03-08 8:57 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hmmmm not bad rockky..... waiting for more ;)

Take care

NN


 
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ROC BRO .............very intresting and well written..(writer ho ki kya ho Broda huh??) well Im a fan already so dont stop and write the other part soon.......Ok....Im gonna subscribe to you so I dont miss out. Bro you now Im very busy trying to prepare my self for the busy holidays ....Wish me luck bro. I catch youall later in SB. I do Miss you all very much...please let others know too.
 
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Intresting Rocky broda!!!!!!Timi ta writer rahechau ni ta!!!!!!!!Keep on writing!!!!!!


 
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mora (maya garera bhaneko) rockend ni hasaunchha ba title nai kya khatarako MERO SATHIKO TWAKE BAU  re hahhahhahahha.....title padhera hans uthya tara katha padhera ali naramailo lagya........chhori birami(?) bhayera ochhyanma palti rakheko tara aama bau chanhi gharma nahunu :s kata kata tya kam uskai bauko ta hoina? sanka lagya malai ta.....anyway waiting for next part......

 
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dammm...this seems to be interesting.....waiting for the next part...!!!!

 
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Nepali Nari Jyu...!!! - thanks for ur comment..!!! NOT bad raicha KASOOO.. !! ma tah jpt huncha kii bhanera daraii ra thiyee...!!! LU jaiii nepal...!!

Maddog- Thanks for ur comment..!! Welll writer ho rey.. Dyaam I wish I were a good writer !!!

Grunge83- .. THANKS for the comment... Ma writer huna ajhaii 40 barsa lagcha rey suneyko kurooo!!! Writer raheychu rey hasayoo ni lai lai !!! ma hasey ni lai lai ..

spoken- OI MORO( maya garera vaneyko) Thanks for the comment...!!! BIcharii Sita.. OOChayan ma chey.. uutna sakdina .. Pida vako cha tara kasai lai vandinaan kina ho kunnii..!!! Lu ke hola vanera vannu chai sakdina sorry SPOOKey...!!! Keep guessing.. next part aamdai cha hehe!!

oblivious- Thanks for the comment..!!! EEY next part aamdena nakurey huncha!! hehe!! just kidding..!!!

Pratikchyaa ko faal meethoo huncha !!! Pratichyaa ma basnu hola sapai jana..!!!

DHAAN KO BALA ra PAAN ko paat dinchu...!!!

- Rockend aka ROCKY or rocks...!!!


 
Posted on 11-04-08 1:22 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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mora copy cat rocky.......:P

 
Posted on 11-06-08 12:23 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Oyeeee SPOKEn.. it's not COPY cat at all... haii.... HOpe you are waiting for part II as yu have said.. and let's hope it that It's better than part I THankyou -Rockend
 
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oye mora rock khoi 2nd part?:s

 
Posted on 11-06-08 4:45 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Rockey,
Nice story, this is really a different style, simple but interesting.


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Good job rocky  the writer :):)....

 
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There is absoulety nothing in this second part hope the ppl who go through this part won’t be disappointed…!!! Thanks for all the readers who posted the comments in the part I...!!

 

Part II

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I am home. I still can’t stop thinking about my friend Sita and wonder what really might have happened in real. I was doing homework and was trying hard to not lose any concentration in doing my work. But my mind goes out of my head even though I try so hard to focus more on my studies.

I am in different world thinking to many stupid things. It’s normal for me as I there are many things just rolling around my mind like the reel tapes. It’s dinner time now. My mom is calling me out loud. I without any response to her loud calling voice I went to the dining room. Dinner time used to always be  full of nice chat with all the family members. Well it was a bit more of a quite environment. I couldn’t figure out why it was so boring that it used to be. Well I thought to myself that I might be the one who felt so coz I was in a different state of mind with mixed feelings in my heart at that very moment.

Dinner is over and I am on the way to bed. Well as always I prayed to the God before sleeping. Today I prayed for my friend Sita to get well soon. Well as always I had the faith in my God that he would take care of me and people around me.

Prince charming

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It’s 11:00 am already. It’s already have been 1 hour of waiting. I think I called about more than a million times. I hate waiting people for long time. I am being like a joke staying in the restaurant waiting for my stupid boyfriend whom I think is my prince charming. I am the one who is always waiting for me wherever we are going. And I don’t know why I give him so much of mine. I guess it might be the “x” factor. I am waiting for him in the restaurant to have lunch and breakfast with him. I hate waiting people for a long time and I was about to explode. I don’t know how I’ll react as I was so furious with anger. First I hate waking up early in the morning and second I haven’t seen him in front of me. He’s supposed to be with me having lunch and breakfast together at the same time.

With smiles in his face he comes late. And he doesn’t even feel bad for coming late. Poor this little girl, she is just lost in his world. I was so fumed with anger but when I saw him in front of these hazel eyes of mine. All the bitter sweet anger of mine got lost out of my mind in a split of second.

Kavita- [Well I was supposed to throw all my anger that I had accumulated in my heart , mind and lips that would utter all those words that would make him feel bad for coming late but instead something else happened] “Hey honey! How are you? What happened you were supposed to come at 10 am? “

Rohit- [with no sense of bitterness of guilty feeling in his heart replies back] Well, I you know I am lazy ass and I wake up late. I work up at around 11:00am and I am here without getting myself fresh at all. And now you should be happy.”[With that reply he smile at me with face that he thought would make me grin with anger]

Kavita-[Not knowing what Rohit said in confusion asks some questions] “You are not fresh?? What do you mean? Well did you have your breakfast or not?

Rohit-“You fool! I mean I didn’t wash my face or brush my teeth. You want to smell my breath. It smells nasty. Well you called me for the breakfast and lunch didn’t you?

[I didn’t even feel bad or got angry at all. But those were his stupid joke that wouldn’t make me laugh. But I was just happy that he came and is having breakfast and lunch with me.]

Rohit- ‘Well I have some surprise for you today. Well I’ll give that surprise to you after we’ll have our lunch and breakfast. Well I am very hungry are you hungry? [Rohit tries to make conversation with me and make me smile in front of him. But he doesn’t know that I am already more than happy to see him around me. I am just lost in his world.]

Rohit-“Hey!!”[He waves his hand in front of my face just to make sure that I was in the restaurant]

Kavita- “Well I am here. Don’t think I am lost around. You aren’t that good to make me lost in her forever.” [I replied to him and tried to show the innocent side of myself. I know I am not good at acting]

Rohit- “Well we got enough time to talk. I am feeling very hungry shall we order food to eat.” I know him a guy who eats a lot and gets hungry wherever he stops by any place like restaurant, café or any place where we can get food to eat.]

[I was still thinking what was the surprise that he was going to give for me. Rohit don’t know that I am always lost in whatever he is saying. I am so badly in love with him that I just don’t have control over myself.]

Rohit- Waiter!! Waiter!! [Rohit raise his hands and waves to one of the waiters of the restaurant.]

Waiter- “Hie! Good morning! How are you guys doing? Are you ready to order?

Rohit-“I am not fresh but fine but I don’t know about my sweet Honey bunch. [Rohit always acts stupid in front of people and make me blush in front of people I don’t know.

Kavita- [there wasn’t any menu in the table that I sat for the last 1 and half hour. And I never saw any waiter approach to me and ask if I wanted to have anything.] “Well we haven’t got the menu yet. Could you please bring 2 menus for us and I guess we will be ready in about 5 minute.”

[We ordered our food and we stayed in the restaurant for about an hour. We had some real fun times of our life. While we were having our lunch and breakfast we had some sweet discussions. Here are some small conversations of all the conversation that we had. You know every people have privacy in their life so I will just share few very sweet and important ones.]

 [Rohit was drinking tea and I was having coffee. Just to get ourselves ready to kick on to our romantic day. But on the very first sip Rohit spilled tea on his shirt. But he didn’t notice it at all. And I found Rohit is still like the little kid who still needs some training.]

Kavita- “Kale you need an apron while eating.”

Rohit- “I am drinking. No I don’t need an apron while I am eating. I need it while I am cooking food. But I’ll never cook as you’ll be there to cook for me. ”

Kavita- “Kale I love your outfit. You look cool and sexy.”

Rohit- “You just noticed it. I am always cool [He smiles with that reply]. Well you look gorgeous today. I can’t stop staring at you.”

Kavita- “That is why I am saying you need an apron while you are eating. And you need to learn to eat and drink. You just spilled tea and you don’t look sexy.” [And I giggled…]

Rahul- “It’s all because of you.”

[Lunch time…!! We had some sweet talks. As Rohit is always busy eating like a monster. We had few time talking. I don’t know why feel for this stupid monster who eats a lot. And always don’t take anything seriously.]

Rohit-“Kalie know what I am planning to go abroad to study after my grade 12 is over.”

Kavita- “Where are you going for further studies? I don’t know what will happen for me. But if you are going abroad then I’ll also go with you to the same place to always be with you.”

Rohit- “I want to go to the United States.”

Kavita- “I fear that I won’t be able to go to U.S. If I won’t be able to go there with you then please wait for me. I’ll always be waiting for you.”

Rohit- “Stupid!!! I’ll be always there for you and I am here with you now. Don’t think too much of what will happen in the future. [He could see me being sad. I guess that’s why he tries to make me smile}. “You know what the lunch will be much better if you smile.”

[Well there were much more of discussion that we had. Let me keep it for secret.]

After the lunch we planned to go somewhere far from the city.

Rohit started his motorbike. And I sat on the back seat. We went pass the dirty congested streets of the city seeing the hustle and bustle of the city. We were on the way to a place where there is nothing but just peace and we two of us.

After a ride on the bike for 15 minutes we left the city on our back and we were on the highway. The speed of the bike increased from the normal 40 km/hr to 80 km/hr. I loved the speed of the life that we were enjoying with the kiss of the air that we had been calling us to the place where we were heading. We passed twists and turns on the highway. After about 30 of drive we were still on the highway but we had to pass an uphill to get to our destination.

Rohit slowed his bike and applied breaks on every turns that came when we heading up the hill. Finally we came to the place and we were on to the base of a hill from where we had to walk. Rohit stopped his bike and told me to get off the bike. I took off my helmet and hugged Rohit in my arms. I told in a loud screaming voice “I LOVE YOU ROHIT”

{I was hugged him tight so tight that I felt like I would never let him go and nobody would be able to grab him away from me.}

And I got a sweet push by Rohit and I could hear some voice in my ear.

MY VILLIAN MY MOM….!!

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My mom was yelling at me. I had to wake up. I woke up and then I realized the voice that was buzzing in my ear was the voice of my mom saying me to wake up. I felt so bad. I felt that I mom was the villain. I was with my prince charming and My Mom forced me get out of my dream land of prince charming.

 

to be continued....!!!

 

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks...!!!


 
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Rocky broda very bad ending of the 'Mero Sathiko Twake Bau'.........

Abo 'Prince charming' ko ta dream story rahecha yahi sakaye bhai halyo ni.....

Good intresting story though...keep on doing good broda.......Rock on!!!!!!!


 
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What's twakey? other than that i enjoyed the story?

thanks for sharing rockend aka rocky or rocks


 
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grunge83- thanks for ur comment...

lau very bad ending rey....... story end nai vako chaina... yetikai end vancha... well wait for part III hai..!!

prince charming was just a dream of Kavita. hehe!!!

MuiiCHuiii- twakey means alcoholic..... !!! the story is not over...!!!

thanks for ur comment too....!!!!

 

keep on following the story.!!! HOpe the story ends well..!!!

Sorry hai mero story ma kunai kunai thau ma word haru missing va raicha...!!! hehe

Rohit-“Kalie know what I am planning to go abroad to study after my grade 12 is over.”

COrrection.....

ROHIT - "kalie you know what I am planning to go abroad after my +2 is over"

well  see you in part III

THANKS !!!!!

 

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks...!!!


 
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Bro... I can see ur words are missing but anyways we get it...

Nice going I love it loll how urself in gals shoes.... hehehe cool keep it up bro.. looking forward to read more

till then take care

NN


 
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Roc bro........Nice work........with a twist in the end....LOL.....i'm enjoying everybit so keep it comming........Ill see you soon in SB, im justa lil busy ok........
 
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Oh ho ho NN jyuu ...!!! thanks for ur comment.. myself in gals shoe.. hehe!! ahile tah hasoo lagyoo ni lai lai eey lai lai

well I don't like doing the grammar checking and all those jeu lagcha and I find some missing words and gramatical mistakes tooh..!!!

maggiee bro- where are you lost yaar..!!

well i forgot the password of the e-mail that I used to create this nick... hehe so i don't get any e-mails as I have been subscribed for my thread or anything like that sorry maggie bro...!!

thanks for your comment maggiee bro..!!

 

ROCKEND aka rocks or rocky..!!


 
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OYE MORA ROCKEND AKA ROCKY OR ROCKS ......YOU SIMPLY RUX MAN
(ANI KHOI TA MERO SATTA BARU MAI CHAR WATA COMMENT DINCHHU BHANNE LE AHILE SAMMA YEUTA NI COMMENT DIYEKO CHHAINA TA LOLL.......KASTO MANCHHE HOLA ).HOPE NEXT PART IS COMMING SOON..........

 



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