Aayo Noon Aayo Noon (as in salt) bhanya jastai Aunu Bho John aaunu Bho John with his creation...Oh ho..aja ta din ramro sanga bitne bho...Yes..I'm so delighted..:D:D


P.S: Aayo Noon Aayo Noon (pahile yeuata add aauthyo ni nepal televisionma, if people still remember)...

John jee,

This is by far the best tale I have read coming out from the Galt land! Superbly crafted narrative skills with your use of the first person narrative that allows the narrator to display the intensity of his inher feelings and thoughts. The depth of such 'confessional intimacy' is one thing that we,your readers, look for in your stories so we too can enter the inner sanctum of your character(s)'s psyche. And you have not failed. The dialogic quality is also striking and this obviously works in tandem with other stylistic features in your prose to deliver your intended overall plot scheme. An impressive end product overall. Keep up the hard work.

Oh, your story reminds me about when I should take my car to the garage for MOT (the annual test to see if it's raod-worthy!). There's then servicing to do as well as the road tax to pay. Phew. Rip-offs everywhere. Pressure-pressure. Or in the more friendly Nep-lish parlance, tensan-nai tensan (tension!). :) There're times I wish I was a monk living in one of those gumbas in the Himalayas.. :) Honestly.

Have got a long super-duper busy day ahead of me. Have a good day.
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Hi to the feisty, fiery foxy one - where art thou? Your absense from the Sajha land was acutely felt - missed you and your wicked wit massively.
Welcome back.

As always wonderful from JG jyu....keep coming!!

Hey JG:

What more can I say of your yet another awesome penmanship....!!!

Well, JJ and I have two things in common- not only drinking Miller Light, but also puffing Newport occasionally. LOL !

Your Ghetto-Superstar, JJ, is truly a champion Ghetto. I just don't understand the reason behind people stereotyping African-Americans or Africans in America. White, Brown, Yellow everybody stereotype blacks- in a negative way. A friend of mine, Nepalese, just fear any one of them from a distant, and avoids a seat in a subway. I am always amazed how people dread people, just because someone is black. Your friend Tara is just another version of my friend. It did not surprise me though....

Anyway, Happy Thanksgiving (however I don't celebrate or many of Sajhaities don't), there is nothing wrong to say it right??? But one thing, "Drive Safe" ya' all....

HD

Jg,

A good one. Keep it coming. Do not leave this without finsihing it. Just a request.

Aiiright. HAve a good holidays.

peace out

Another good piece from John. By the way ?He was good looking, extremely good looking for an afro? sounds a bit racists if not stereotypical, doesn?t it? There are tons of people who find blacks more attractive than other races.
Anyway back to the point, I also spent few years studying in south and in a small town. Some of your stories have reminded me of those dull Sunday afternoons, empty streets, and churches with filled parking lots. Yet another good work. Keep them coming.

thanks for sharing, john! i really enjoy your stories and how they always deal with people, relationships between those people, and coming to realizations. keep writing; we'll keep reading!

hey john galt bro :oD...yes yes.....i did read it today(actually the day is over ;oP hehe)WOOHOOOO!!and in me own sweet time when its all tranquil and nice(dyam i think storm is coming :o| just heard the thunder roaring hah!bloody joke!just after i mentioned peace :o| hehe oh well that just means will have a cosy sleep ;oP hehe)

anyways as i was sayn before i meandered again ;oP hehe...well guess everyone def will always come expect smthing(well im talkn about me duh!in case some of u r the type who ever expects even the slightest thing ;oP hehe)...so just seeing u had posted smthing earlier today...kinda made me 'expect' somethings..u know...kinda made me feel...i will enjoy readin it once i read it ;o) hehe..and well guess wat?after i read it...i think this is an understatment...but yap did enjoy ;o)...how much?wish i could tell ...which i wont be able to a nyways so hehe dun mind me not tryn to explain hai :oS hehe..there are somethings lookn foward to life..and hehe dyam ur tales are becomin that to me :o| hehe..dun mind me hai..in case it seems im expectin too much ;oP..free will !!!remember ;oP hehe...we 'pay' for our own expectations ;oP hehe...

la ta enuf lame comments ;oP hehe...even the birds have stopped chirping :o|...just realised :o| hehe...think they knew i was typing :o| wahahaha ;oP hehe...dunno if those birds were caged :o| few of them were chirping(at this time :o|) from the same 'spot' for quite some time :o|.. pheri meander :oS hehe...

got a long day tomorrow(i think ;oP hehe)..so off i go to switch off me lights....have a good one there..and hehe...hope to see another one soon..if not soon ..later so be it ;o) hehe..

oops better go check if they are showin the football match in 3 hrs time..and if they are..wat match?..well some ppl got nothn better to do ke ;oP hehe...

cheers for sharing :oD.....
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sandhurst bro pani yaha?hehe..hope ur doing great..i been readn ;o)...alik this frens laptop test me patience :o| ..but better than nothn hoina?;oP hehe...anyways nice to see u and hope ur busy days goes good...me day was great..a bit of this..a bit of that..a lot of this and lot of that hehe..tara in the end...wah!felt good..i mean do think almost every time before i close me eyes and do a bit of recollection of me day(life)..if i do 'remember' to hehe...just feels good...cos yap so much good ni ;o)..hope thats the same for u :oD....

and since im already sayn hi..hehe...
scarlett hi hehe...think u havent been here for a while hoina?busy is good if u ask me :oD..anyways hope things goin good there with u too...

and well hi to all re kya ;oP hehe...

have a good day!...and dun stop blastin the keyboard of urs ;o)...i will try when i can ..dun worry wont try too hard ;oP hehe...

hunk,
thanks for your compliments, I wished the story was more concise....cannot help digressing. And what a surprise....where are you in south?

Miss lost in translation....ni hao,
Didn't I tell you I was badly mutated? I look like an amalgamation of godzilla and kingkong...I only lack their sizes.

lahure jyu,
Reading your reply makes me change the our old forbidden cliche' to "modesty is the best policy" . I am not certainly not worthy of such adulation....but like an avarice newbie...I also cannot be more happy to be praised by such a luminary like you.

well said humdrum,
I had met a few georgtownians in DC last year...all students of medicine...they asked me to get my statistic straight.. the percentage of whites smoking pot was exponentially higher than african americans when compared to their percentage in population. Happy thanksgiving to you too.

Highfly,
wish I had more time for the sequel...which I might...during winter holidays...thanks for reading.

Sristi,
Thanks for reading...I do not see you much in sajha these days...hibernating???

Hurray,
you know how it is in smalltown don't you? whites despise blacks and call em names...but the term afro was just a suitable adjective for the story...had I been a racist...i would not have made friends with jermaine. your narration of small town make me go back to illinois again...how about eating pumpkin pies and visiting fairgrounds during sundays?

gaule,
I learn from people, I keep books aside when it comes to real life issues and yes...meeting every unique character makes me look from their perspective.

anynomous,
I am sorry not being able to stand up to your expectations...but then what would you expect from a newbie like me? it is all gibberish...I am glad you did not miss your train yesterday....

Sometimes your perspectives lie to you and then, one day undiscovered truths open a different perspective from which you see the complete new world!!!!
Just dropped in to say "Let JG write forever!!! You Rock!!!"....:)

dhat thot so..misunderstandin huncha again ;oP..hehe

JG bro...u always seem to go over me expectation bhaneyko ho ;o)...plus i do have high expectations hai if u thot otherwise re kya ;oP hehe..

as some have mentioned..time to time alikiti modesty throw away gardeu pls ;o) hehe...katti ho!!!bhaney!!!;oP hehe...oh well u r u ;o) hehe...pheri sorry bhanyo for nothing :o| hehe...i shud be sorry for not being to commend as much as i want to..cos i dunno how to :oS...thats just me hehe..but im sure one day i will be..hope cha re kya ;o)..thats why wont say sorry and 'forgive' meself ;oP hehe....

and oh..that train..missed it hehehe and was 2 hrs late :o|..but no worries ni...in the end things did turn out fine..great as always ;o)...

la i better make this thread more 'visible'...sheesh someone shud put his name beside the title!!!;oP hehe....and yap gettn late for smthing again so i better get out hehe...jahiley rush :oS hehe...

have a good day :oD...
hopefully will get to read another soon ;o)..if not there is always later ;o)...

Nirman bro.."you Rock" re?dunga?;oP hehe...well an curious how this whole slang of "you rock" came about...any idea?...cos i do know time to time when someone says "oi dunga" that aint really a compliment is it?;oP hehe...

*gone*

Nirman,
Thanks....but rocking makes me sleep....belgian candies khoi bhanya?

anonymous,
I am filled with gratitude over your kind remarks...thank you so much...I shall shun my modesty if you laugh more on your reply....

You rock? Dhungaa re? hee hee.. hassaayoh ,,dannyboy leh.

Mr.Galt, in all sincerity i feel that all the readers in Sajha ,myself included would not mind your pix if u wud be so complying , but i actually meant that i would like to have a peek at the guy you mentioned in the above tale.Not kidding...
Anymore coming up though.. one of your tales i mean?

gone with the wind...

Scarlett,

sorry to have misunderstood you....I have a picture of JJ with me...but public display of one's picture without permission evokes trouble....who else knows it better than you mademoiselle?

Touche ,dear sire.:))

gone with the wind...

So you see....