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newtech
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Posted on 07-22-08 4:02
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Dipesh was dreaming in his sleep when there was a knock at his bedroom door. "Get up! Its already late", his mother said. dipesh got up, took up a shower, dressed quickly and got ready for his college. Dipesh was very nice-looking, intelligent and humorous boy. He was very popular among his fellows. Everybody was impressed by him through his qualities. Meanwhile, the exams were coming near and Dipesh was preparing himself day and night. Later on when the results were declared in the college auditorium, Dipesh secured first position in the college. His joy knew no bounds. But there was something that was perpetually horrifying him. He was suffering from brain Tumour. He went home and talked to his mother about the results. After saying so he went to sleep. The next was a holiday. He didn''t had to go to the college, so he decided to go for a walk. As he was walking down the street, his eyes caught the sight of a girl working in a CD store. Her heavenly presence made Dipesh forgot the real world. He started staring at her through the transparent glasses of the store and he was lost in the world of love. He had lost his heart to her. He went inside the CD store, introduced himself to the girl and then got some CD''s. After this he asked the girl for her introduction. Her name was rima. The next day he got up as usual and dressed up for the college. While on his way he again went to the CD store, exchanged wishes with rima and had a little informal conversation with her. After that he got out of the CD store and went to his doctor who had earlier advised him to undergo some treatment. He thought that everything would be all right but fate had already stored ill-luck for him. The doctor diagonosed that his brain tumour had reached to its last stage. Now he had hardly a month to live. When he heard all this his dreams were shattered like a mirror and he was completely broken down. He suddenly began to think of his mother, college mates, relatives and above all his love, rima. Dipesh had decided that after taking the reports, he will invite Rima for a lunch and will tell her about his love towards her. But when he reached the CD store he saw rima inside the CD store with some customers. Tears rolled down his cheeks. Now he was afraid to tell her about his love because he knew that his love was short-lived. And he couldn''t fulfil his dreams and ambitions. Each day Dipesh went to the CD store and got some CD''s just to talk to Rima. Otherwise he hadn''t any interest in the CD''s. Each day he used to have brief conversations with her and her presence made him feel in heaven and he felt that his pain had subsided when he just looked at her. He was always anxious to tell her about his love but he resisted because he thought that if she had the same feelings towards him, then she cannot bear his loss. This thought made him scared of confession. After about one month Dipesh died. When Dipesh didn''t came to the CD store for a long time as per routine, rima felt worried and decided to went to his home. She enquired about him from his mother and she told her about his death and took her to his room. There she saw all the CD packets unopened. And she cried bitterly. You know why? Because she had kept paper chits in all the CD packets to let him know how much she loved him!!!
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Posted on 07-22-08 4:43
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wow nice but tragic piece...keep writing..
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Posted on 07-22-08 5:02
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WOW! What an ending. I was thiking that Rima would never find out.You never know how life will end. Great Story
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newtech
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Posted on 07-23-08 2:00
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Hi rekhaji!
Thankx for ur compliments. will try to write more stories in future.
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prem chopda
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Posted on 07-23-08 2:27
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Are u sure this is ur original story? Long time ago i have seen a tv serial based on story and one episode reminds me exactly same story the one u posted here. Whatever the story is nice and it reminds me that long gone story that i watched in Ek kahani telecast in Doordarshan.
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Posted on 07-23-08 3:22
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desh dhotile lagisakyo ta mulaharu chanhi love story sunaudai bas.
geda jasta haru
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Posted on 07-24-08 1:19
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Well.....Story ta ramrai ho......tara Original story lai yata uta garera naya story banaunu chai ramro haina jasto lagyo malai.....ka bata dipesh re ani ka bata rima re..haha....anyway ....koshish garnu bhayecha..ramrai ho tara tyo hindi movie le afnai original story ho bhanera angrezi movie ko copy garya jasto feel bho......:D
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