Considering you are a fellow Nepali and you are one of the most persistent "artist" I have ever seen, I really want to support you. But you gotta take people's feedback and also try to learn the genre. It seems you just want to drop a new song every other week without any meaningful lyrics, rhymes or hooks. Why don't you seek some advice from somebody who is in the business, somebody who can sing and somebody who can write?
Good luck bro, hope you get better at this; for now don't quit your day job just yet.

 All I hear is "she is a Potty girl"! lol

Malai ni kehi line lekhna man lagyo!!!

Yo! Yo!
I heard yau' been wanted in Raw bars too
Hope yo will pass in that foo'
Laure n balen will be in yau anti
Eklavya bahun is hurry for your' janti
well gud luck you gonna represent as nepali from amrica
Hope you will be better than rapoholic in England

Ani jau babu timi pani torilaure haru ko bich bolna angreji ma
Hira po niskincha ki koila ko khani ma
English ta bhai ko babal cha ni
Chakit huncha ki sacar bhai ni timro boli ma

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i like it oh yaa raw barz